In “Persuit” of Happiness?

Notice anything wrong with the copy on this web page?  Love this company’s products, but this was the first thing I saw when I opened their site this morning!

Again, I say spelling and grammar DO matter.  Mistakes reflect poorly on a company’s image, they suggest a lack of attention to detail, and can cause miscommunication.

Most of the time, all it takes is asking someone else to proofread your work.  Another person’s eyes always catch things you miss!  Speaking of which, sometimes I need a proofreader for MY work.  Anyone have any recommendations?  Anyone want to volunteer?

5 Reasons Why Good Writing Still Matters

I have an otherwise sophisticated, intelligent client whose company boilerplate brochure content includes this bullet point (“genericized” to preserve anonymity):

  • Virtual widget center staffed by the same award-winning engineering team employed by the fastest growing widget-making organization in the state.

Wait…which team?  Are they part of my client’s company, or another company altogether?  Which is the fastest-growing organization…my client’s, or someone else’s?  And furthermore, what benefit is any of this to me, the customer?

Every time I see this copy, I cringe.  I’ve tried repeatedly to change it, and my efforts have so far been rebuffed, for reasons that remain murky.  It has inspired me to create a short list of reasons why—today more than ever—quality writing is essential to your business:

  1. Clarity. Don’t confuse your customers or potential customers.  Poorly worded or misspelled advertisements, web copy, and other marketing materials can misrepresent your company and/or your offerings. In fact, one recent study showed that a single spelling error cut online sales in half!
  2. Persuasiveness. Well-crafted marketing and sales materials help you persuade people to pay attention to your products and services. There’s a reason why “Got milk?” and “Just do it” work.
  3. Positioning. With the thousands of emails, advertisements, tweets, blog entries (!), and old-fashioned sheets of paper we see daily, doesn’t it make sense to try to stand out…and stand out in a positive, professional way?  You only have a few seconds to make an impression on your reader.
  4. SEO. If your “key words” are misspelled, how can search engines find them on your website?
  5. Respect. Wasting your customers’ time with meaningless, confusing, or incorrect information costs you dearly.  In contrast, offering useful, well-presented, appropriate information shows that you value their time and their intelligence.

Even if YOU don’t understand the difference between “your” and “you’re,” or know when to use “adverse” versus “averse,” odds are good that someone reading what you write DOES.  Don’t let poor writing get in the way of earning new business!